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titianblue's picture
60 pencils

Question and Answer typographic art

Hello everyone,

Thanks in advance for your critique. I was doing this as merely a typographic exercise. This was done in Illustrator CS3 to be used possibly as signage.

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monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

I can see where you where going, but it looks like clip art slapped over the top of some type at the minute. The floral shapes don't really gel with the type in a comfortable way. And I'm not sure about the placement of the letters. Sessions has lovely kerning. Keep going, with refinement this could be nice.

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Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

What he said. :) I was going to ad just the same.
It also doesn't read like a Q.

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

Q is horrible
first fix it
=]

yes I'm brazilian xD

titianblue's picture
60 pencils

Thanks for your comments. Sometimes you need someone else to look at it with fresh eyes.

What do you suggest?

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

it seems "glued"
you need to make interventions on typography as volume or lined shadows (I'm not talking about drop shadow ok)

yes I'm brazilian xD

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