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sammybunny (88 pencils) | Sat, 2008-05-24 16:39

Business card I designed for my sister who works as an independent business owner for Quixtar/ Amway Global.

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natobasso | Sun, 2008-05-25 19:27

Too many different font styles. No hierarchy. I couldn't tell this was a business card till you said it was. That's bad.

Does this person sell the energy drink?

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sammybunny | Mon, 2008-05-26 04:05

My sister sells a lot of that product. I will work on the hierarchy a bit. Thanks!

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sammybunny | Mon, 2008-05-26 04:05

My sister sells a lot of that product. I will work on the hierarchy a bit. Thanks!

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gwells | Tue, 2008-05-27 21:43

i don't understand why you're using a grunge font for this. seems out of place with the rest of the design.

the card really doesn't give any indication of what she does. and since there are two (i presume) different products (or sets of products) on two different web sites, it may be confusing to show one product in the image.

and i'm not sure an energy drink is "motivation."

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sammybunny | Thu, 2008-05-29 20:03

Motivation- for energy.

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