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Scabby's picture
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Record Label sticker

This is a 3x3 promo sticker for the record label where I work. They haven't really indicated any particular use for the stickers, they just want something to give away, raise awareness, and seem cool with the youths and such.

The chair is their logo, the rest is supposed to just look nice. What do you all think?

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vinylsofa's picture
50 pencils

It is missing somehow though. First impression is the grass and sand. It feels a bit wafty. Kind of balding. Because it's alsways going to have that photoshopped look, how about erring on the side of luxurious rather than sparse. Saturating the grass or having a hyperreal golden sand?

paka's picture
37 pencils

I know, you said chair is their logo, but I would definitely do something with that chair... I dunno.. maybe I would but some nice forest background and instead of that chair put some photo realistic old chair in the middle of the filed. Above I would put smaller chair logo with a name.

All idea is nice, and trust me, if I find such CD in shop, I would like it. Cheers!
paka

jonathanmortimer's picture
45 pencils

This doesn't scream youth to me, it seems it would suit classical music enjoyed by your typical middle-aged person, possibly about to retire. If you want to go with a more youth-oriented image then you need to include some bare sand with a towel or something, and perhaps like paka says - do something with the chair, maybe you could place a crab on the arm! I would make the chair slightly smaller too, it's quite overpowering as it is (and probably needs to be more upright, it looks like it's sinking to the left and front).

Scabby's picture
127 pencils

It's not supposed to be for youths, but rather for a young (18-35) wannabe-hipster demographic.
I don't really care at all at this point as I no longer am working on this project, and they have decided to go for a stupidly giant sticker that no one will want anyway, but out of interest, more critiques are certainly welcome.

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