Like the treatment of the star and stripes on the F, but I'd up the size of the company name; you're going to lose it and the bevel treatment when it's reduced.
To be honest, the bevel doesn't really do much for this logo. Agreeing with 3dogmamma's comments. This logo looks very 80s/Top Gun (the movie) to me. Was that your intent?
Submitted by Remedy Films on Tue, 2008-02-26 03:35.
haha no i wasnt going for a top gun look but i see where you are coming from. I am trying to make a clean sharp looking logo. i want to be able to eventually brand myself just by using the RF look ( i am making films for the wakeboard industry, its a smaller industry). if i have to use the text only we are going to have the two lines with a star in between the words Remedy and Films.
Instead of getting rid of the lines i made them a little thicker to match the other lines. I removed the embossing. I brought to alignment the left hand side and the right hand side, as well as the vertical spacing. I also made the Remedy FIlms text a bit thicker.
i dont understand the "look at the i can use!" phrase? mind clearing that up?
do i have to repost the logo again, or can i add it to this critique?
I gotta say your logo doesn't look anything like a wakeboarding vid company logo should. Not only that (I worked in the DVD industry for 3+ years) but your logo, especially the text at the bottom, will be lost at the tiny sizes it will be required to be used and printed at.
Do some research and I think you'll find your RF logo is just too stiff and literal to be accepted by your age target.
I think what that person meant was "look at what I can do!".
Hey Bro! I see you have been working on a new look. I do somewhat agree with natobasso about it not being the right look for the targeted wakeboarding group.. but I think I understand where you are coming from with a more mature grown up aproach to it.. instead of the splattered grunge look thats whored over every other "xtreme sport" logo. looking forward to seeing what you got next.
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Submitted by Remedy Films on Wed, 2008-03-05 16:28.
Thanks but im not looking for critique on the Name, the business is already set up. I really dont think that people will get Remedy Editorial mixed up with Remedy Films.
google flik design and you get like 8 companies... pure design has 100 million different ones... it happen.
so one other one in the same field is no prob!
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In fact it does become a problem if there's ever an issue in the consumer's minds as to which company is the real Remedy Films. This is where trademark law comes into play.
Like the treatment of the
Like the treatment of the star and stripes on the F, but I'd up the size of the company name; you're going to lose it and the bevel treatment when it's reduced.
ttfn!
3dogmama
To be honest, the bevel
To be honest, the bevel doesn't really do much for this logo. Agreeing with 3dogmamma's comments. This logo looks very 80s/Top Gun (the movie) to me. Was that your intent?
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yeah, ditch the bevel
it's incredibly distracting, dated, and it looks more like "look at the i can use!"
the company name isn't lined up properly on the left with the lines and is below center between them, craft is important.
not sure what your design elements bring to the table (or why they're there). why the reversed letters? why the stars/stripes?
i'm not sure you have a good concept yet.
All I have to say is the
All I have to say is the same that nota and gwells said. Get rid of the bevel. I'm not sure the lines above and below the name work as well.
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haha no i wasnt going for a top gun look but i see where you are coming from. I am trying to make a clean sharp looking logo. i want to be able to eventually brand myself just by using the RF look ( i am making films for the wakeboard industry, its a smaller industry). if i have to use the text only we are going to have the two lines with a star in between the words Remedy and Films.
Instead of getting rid of the lines i made them a little thicker to match the other lines. I removed the embossing. I brought to alignment the left hand side and the right hand side, as well as the vertical spacing. I also made the Remedy FIlms text a bit thicker.
i dont understand the "look at the i can use!" phrase? mind clearing that up?
do i have to repost the logo again, or can i add it to this critique?
I gotta say your logo
I gotta say your logo doesn't look anything like a wakeboarding vid company logo should. Not only that (I worked in the DVD industry for 3+ years) but your logo, especially the text at the bottom, will be lost at the tiny sizes it will be required to be used and printed at.
Do some research and I think you'll find your RF logo is just too stiff and literal to be accepted by your age target.
I think what that person meant was "look at what I can do!".
Add the new logo to this critique.
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Hey Bro! I see you have been
Hey Bro! I see you have been working on a new look. I do somewhat agree with natobasso about it not being the right look for the targeted wakeboarding group.. but I think I understand where you are coming from with a more mature grown up aproach to it.. instead of the splattered grunge look thats whored over every other "xtreme sport" logo. looking forward to seeing what you got next.
peace
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Your company name might get
Your company name might get you confused with these guys: Remedy Editorial
Thanks but im not looking
Thanks but im not looking for critique on the Name, the business is already set up. I really dont think that people will get Remedy Editorial mixed up with Remedy Films.
They are in a similar
They are in a similar industry...
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Not critiquing the name,
Not critiquing the name, just pointing out how it might possibly be confusing.
google flik design and you
google flik design and you get like 8 companies... pure design has 100 million different ones... it happen.
so one other one in the same field is no prob!
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Search flikWORLD Design (not
Search flikWORLD Design (not flik design) on yahoo and my website is the first one that comes up.
http://search.yahoo.com/search?p=flikworld+design&ei=UTF-8&fr=moz2
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I was just trying to make a
I was just trying to make a point bud ;-)
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I know, but you were a bit
I know, but you were a bit off. :)
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In fact it does become a
In fact it does become a problem if there's ever an issue in the consumer's minds as to which company is the real Remedy Films. This is where trademark law comes into play.
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