Revised Valeting Logo

bean (40 points) | Sat, 2009-07-11 12:59

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following your advice i scrapped the car idea, this new logo is supposed to be an alloy wheel, hope you can tell, please let me know what you think and which you reckon is the best,

Lee

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Ivan | Sat, 2009-07-11 14:33

I think the first one works.

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bean | Sun, 2009-07-12 13:18

thanks, do you think it could be better? its for my own valeting business so i'll be putting as much time into it as necessary, any ideas welcome

Ivan | Sun, 2009-07-12 18:25

Yes, it needs an idea. Think about what makes your company better then the next one? Or think about something unique that people can remember about your company. A wheel is too generic.

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Ruthy | Sun, 2009-07-12 18:17

I think the first one is the best. The third one is not easily legible when small.

"The more you tighten your grip, the more star systems will slip through your fingers." Princess Leia

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bean | Sun, 2009-07-12 23:13

im a bit stumped for ideas, the main quality would be how hard horking physically myself and my business partner are, and we wont be employing just anyone so each job will be done perfectly, the work just includes, a jetwasher, van, wash and wax, a few chemical cleaners, cloths n shammys and water? hmm, i was thinking of adding some droplet shapes flying off of the wheel, giving the message were fast, any good or should i just scrap the wheel idea all together?

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herbalist | Tue, 2009-07-14 11:54

but i think, logo say us about auto company, then valeting business.

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