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Revolver Ver. 2

jferguson757 (93 pencils) | Fri, 2009-05-29 15:51

So here's another business card I came up with for my buddy's Beatles tribute band. Their name is Revolver so this one is more of a nod to the album artwork of the Beatles' album by the same name. It's definitely not as elaborate as that original art, but he wanted simple and I agree. Any design suggestions? I like that "The Beatles" is noticeably smaller than "Revolver". Though I'm not sure how well it will translate to the small size of a business card.

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3dogmama | Fri, 2009-05-29 16:27

I like your treatment of the band's name. However, the type coming off the L is too small.

The linears and the green apple aren't doing it for me. I'd also try something a little more psychedelic or illustration-heavy like the original Revolver album cover.

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gwells | Fri, 2009-05-29 17:03

what 3dogmama said.

plus your main text is far too tightly tracked/kerned. the letters are touching each other. ok for a logo, not ok for blocks of text.

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