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N.Flinchbaugh's picture
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S G Vani

Designed for a company who works with forest restoration and preservation.

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NRcreative's picture
239 pencils

plants, water and fire? am i right? the font is just wrong in my oppinion, doesnt suit the mark
imo.

N.Flinchbaugh's picture
36 pencils

Yea the three elements. They deal with a lot of forest fire reforestation. The font was hard to get right. Thanks for the critique.

Art D. Rector's picture
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The font is totally inappropriate for me. The mark has some promise, but it's hard to tell if the parts are well drawn or crappy clip art quality because you posted a lo-res version (apparently). Also those gradients are going to be nothing but trouble down the road.

Ivan's picture

I like the idea here, but needs simplification and refinement.

Anders's picture
413 pencils

Remove tacky gradients, redo the typography and you're onto something.

Landon91's picture
82 pencils

Maybe try sans serif since the element marks are so crisp and modern looking. Loose the gradient too.

www.jackmancer.com's picture
545 pencils

Top one reminds me of Drupal logo.

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

too much dispersive, in this case better if made monocolor.
bad typography.
good start point.

yes I'm brazilian xD

juliasaurusrex's picture
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I agree with the above comments, definitely try a blocky, sans serif, the elements are very non serif. Besides the font, my other problem with it is the shape of the three elements, the plant and fire "drops" seem to be the same shape, while the water has a little more flair.... was this on purpose? its distracting to me. if they are all going to be slightly different shapes, i'd personally change the number of "cutouts" each one had. for instance water has two, i'd make the fire have three, then plants have four. or something like that. it'd add volume without the use of all those gradients?

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