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ftrc's picture
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São Paulo Fashion Week Party

my first work using a mix of vector and image. i hope i can do do better next time because i didnt like it that much.

São Paulo Fashion Week Party

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walks_in2_trees's picture
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I think the "beads" at the bottom are too much and interfere with the title, instead I would, on the left side, bring the color objects down to join the ones near the bottom as per the right side.

also I'm not sure I like the font used in the title, though I think white is a good color choice for it, I feel like it needs to feel a little more exciting shapewise. perhaps also it should be a little more south of center

also don't forget to include bleeds (at least 1/4 inch) on the head foot and face if this is a cover

"...and mamma cried: Watch out where the huskies go, don't you eat that yellow snow" - Frank Zappa

ftrc's picture
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the bad part about the font is that it is their logo, so i couldnt play with it.

walks_in2_trees's picture
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that occured to me after I submitted my post, I think recall seeing it before, those rectangles in perspective are part of the logo too right?

"...and mamma cried: Watch out where the huskies go, don't you eat that yellow snow" - Frank Zappa

ftrc's picture
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if you are talking about the ugly piece on the right, you are right.

kpgrafix's picture
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i think the logo is lost in the poster.. why on her nose?




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put the aperol logo nearer to the title logo (SPFW). Then they appear related. Right now that aperol logo is all I can see and it detracts from the call to action of the poster: to go to Fashion Week.

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