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Scanning Co Trifold Brochure

This is a trifold brochure for a document scanning and imaging company that is expanding its services. I don't know that the darker brown is showing up quite right (looks different on my home computer). I've had difficulty trying to decide how to line up the pluses on the inside (attachment). Should they be spaced evenly or should they line up with the text they are next to? The ideas was for them to serve sort of as bullets, but maybe I should reconsider altogether? Thanks for any feedback

Scanning Co Trifold Brochure

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Ivan's picture

The pluses are fine. I would work on the cover a bit. Everything looks a bit too similar in size. Maybe you can make the headline and logos smaller.

mara06's picture
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It has a kind of retro feeling that suits the service. Nice colors, too.

Mara

hyperviolet's picture
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good color choices.. thinking about ivan's suggestion maybe you could make the folder very big so that it is cropped by the edges ? just an idea.

nice, clean work.

olliesan1's picture
288 pencils

I agree there could be more variation in size. Thanks for the feedback/suggestions! :-)

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