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Self Potrait

My assignment again... it's a self potrait... use to represent myself and my favorite things... i quite like this design... but i knew that the design is not good enough... i wish to have more comment to helping in my design improvement... any kind of comment are welcome, thanks!

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Self Potrait

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Difficult to know that this is actually a self-portrait and not some generic picture about Japanese culture (or where ever that is).

I think the stuff in the background needs to be more subtle, maybe you could dim the brightness or saturation slightly such that the images of you stand out more, the coloured circles could be the same saturation level as you just to add a bit of sparkle :)

I like the idea though.

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