Sensual Whispers
Matt Davey (153 points) | Tue, 2006-07-04 16:10A global audio publishing company that encourages, promotes, and advocates increased intimacy, passion and SEX, in relationships.
What do you think? I need your thoughts and Ideas Please!

Matt Davey - Graphic and Web Design www.mdfolio.co.uk
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Of the five options, I think the top let is the cleanest. But the lips you're using....they look like grandma's. Cracked, dry, and a little scary. I like the idea, but please get a better pair of lips to use. These ones are scary.
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Personally I love the lips and I am rather offended as my boyfriend matt traced my lips to use in his design. I do not believe that I have grandma's lips and the design, he based it on how the light was catching my lips at the time.
It's not your lips he's dissing it's the graphic representation of them. And I agree. i'm sure you have very sensual lips, but the way the light fell on them that day has been rendered to look a little.. well...puckered.
I also like the composition of the top left version. Something striking about the assymetrical treatment of the lips and of the colour. If the lips were a bit smoother, (wetter?), then it'd look great. Similar linework to the woman's sillouhette maybe.
I had to look twice to make sure I was seeing it correctly. At first I saw a 'bug' crawling with creepy legs. Then I read the type and thought they were 'another' pair of lips with hair. [Hardcore Cringe]
They just aren't working the way they should with the 'soft' feel of the words 'sensual whispers'. The graphic should support this mode and I agree that they are a good direction but you need to work on additional options.
I like the 'hot pink' but I don't care for the burst options and keep seeing the need for better intergration of the type and graphic in the design. [The vertical type is way too difficult to read and you need a 'softer' more sexy typeface]
P.S. - Tell your GF this is a design critique and not to take things so personal. We're giving our professional opinion about the image presented, not judging her because you used an abstract drawing of her lips.
I apologise for taking comments to seriously I tend to take things to heart.
In this pacticular design matt has exaggerated my lips slightly to make them look more desirable. Though as 'vinylsofa' sofa said the light on them does make them look puckered
Also a comment from myself about the bottom two designs, I think that the jagged edges on the burst designs are too harsh for the actual item that they are meant to be representing. As lips and the curves of a womans body are usually smooth it seems to be almost an opposite of it.
Though I really do love the deep red on the top design as it does seem to display the sensual, romantic theme.