Hi everyone I just discovered this community and this is my first post...
I like this ad i made, but what do you think?
Copy says: Nothing is superficial when it is enjoyed deeply.
“This is ur life, and it’s ending one minute at a time.”
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that black line for the background is a little disturbing to me and segregates the female from the car...probably not what you want to get across in an ad. also is it me or are the rays ginormous in scale to the dolphins and person?...maybe i dont know my animals that well :shrug: other than that...it looks clean.
MAYBE...and this is only ticky tack, but maybe change the red type on the bottom right to black, i dont see why red was chosen...unless its specifically supposed to be red, in which case leave it alone.
xacto!
I don't get it.
The key point of a great advert is a simple and more importantly, a clear message. This doesnt have it at all ( even with the translation ) .. The compositing of the girl / car / sea life is just really, erm.... 'abstract'?
Sorry but this doesnt do anything for me, i too dont get it.
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Goo
iRez, you´re right about the scales, the black line was to make clear that this is an acuarium, and the red line was a mandatory.
For those who don´t get the ad, this was linked to a TV spot, i know its not the best in advertising, but sometimes you must do it that way.
Thanks for your comments !
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“This is Mau life, and it’s ending one minute at a time”
“This is ur life, and it’s ending one minute at a time.”