Server Samurai Ad
swisscheese9797 (33 points) | Wed, 2008-02-06 20:24This is a student project I did many years ago. I am more skilled and much more accomplished than I was back then. I want to dig it up and see what i can do with it now. Before I do that I'd like to see what you think can be improved on. I don't want to mess with the 3d rendered area as, at this point, it would be hard to go back and change anything on that. The part I like the least is the top. I was never able to find a great solution for placing that text at the top.
What do you think? One thought I have is to make the bottom panel straight and make the edge look torn. It might also be a good idea to add a warm color like orange or tan to the panel to balance out the blue in the middlle. Any and all sugestions are welcome, thanks.
PS: Since this is a student project, the company does not really exist
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I went to the website that didn't exist. Is this a real product, or are you just messing around?
You might want to use the Spell Checker.
I like the illustration, but it looks like the Samurai figure is going to hack and slash the servers, not protect them. Also, there is inconsistency with details - high detailing on the servers, virtually no detailing otherwise.
The bulleted list virtually makes no sense to me. It seems like you took a tagline and made it a list. Weird. Why not bullet some advantages or something?
I agree on using a different colour, there is too much blue. The logo seems a bit large, as well. I don't really like 3D rendered-looking logos, but that might just be me.
Overall it just looks like there is very little concept or information. If this is not a made up product, it really seems like it.
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At first glance it was cool. But on closer inspection it looks like the Samurai was actually looking like he was about to attack the servers. . .lol (kinda Hitchcockian in a way. . . e e e e e e e ) lol
It DID grab my attention.
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