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aaqibdesign's picture
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Shah Media Logo

So.... this is my logo for freelance work. Kindly feel free for comments.

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Rabid_Hatter's picture
39 pencils

It feels like a really good start, but I'm not really sure about the purple; it doesn't really say media to me. The font is interesting but the letter spacing feels a bit off, especially in "designs & solutions". It feels rather clunky. Also, "designs & solutions" sounds a bit clumsy to me. What about "design solutions" instead? I'm also not sure I really understand the image either. I'm getting radio waves of some sort, but I'm wondering if the leftmost form is supposed to be an "s" or what. I hope that helps a bit.

armaanahluwalia's picture
38 pencils

Hey,

I agree with rabid hatter... keep the shah media font(only thing that possibly works) ... dont understand any of the rest.. dont understand what youre trying to say..dont know whats with the overly spaced, over sized tagline... sorry for being a downer but im not in the right frame of mind to give constructive suggestions.. anyone?

dalu's picture
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I don't undesrtand your logo... I don't know what.... but something is missing there.

Dalu

Ivan's picture

I think it's too complicated. Try doing the logo without lettering, colors or effect. Just black and white. When it works in black and white, you can go and try adding everything.

aaqibdesign's picture
13 pencils

thanks everyone for your comments, I really appreciate for all of your comments. Ivan i will do it as you said... and yes it is little bit difficult to understand

about that thing which you all doesn't understand is ( SM in english and "shah" in arabic)

and yes....designs & solutions is also bothering me too much.....am lost in this area.

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gwells's picture
1711 pencils

that's supposed to be "SM?"

i honestly thought it said "Jill." or maybe "Sill."

zaheer's picture
1 pencil

The logo makes no sense, but it is appealing. The font is cool, though.

the colours are quite nice.

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

The problem with the "designs & solutions" part is you need to decide what you want. If you want tracked lettering, you need the actual word spaces between "designs & solutions" (right now it looks like there are no spaces - just tracking). If you want the words connected "designs&solutions" - you can't have the extreme tracking.

I kind of like the hoogie above the words, but as with everyone else - I have no idea what it's supposed to be.

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