Shamone MF - Logo for a boat
mmackinven (38 pencils) | Tue, 2011-08-30 04:41Here's a work in progress for a logo design for my brothers new boat.
The name itself is one of my bro's favorite sayings - Shamone mother f*&^%r! From Bo Selecta (Michael Jackson skit).
We catch a heap of fish every time we go out, so needs an epic name ;)
What do you guys think?
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not sexy
yes I'm brazilian xD
The strokes are too varied and it's turning more psychedelic rather than 80's pop, unsure if that's a desired effect but it's what I'm seeing. If you wanted to help that out a bit I'd even the stroke weights/ variants out just a tag so that everything was more balanced :)
although boat names are standart write with very "personnel" calligraphic, don't need to be font grade.
yes I'm brazilian xD
Everything about this is wrong. Line quality is shaky. There are connectivity issues. Several uncomfortable negative spaces. And just too much going on.
And I consider it kinda tacky. But that's for a different forum
I read up to "Sham" and then my eyes follow that thing you're doing with the "M". It's just squiggly lines all over.
Smooooooth tool plx.
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It looks like a bad tattoo. I like the idea, but this needs to breath more. Everything looks so compacted.
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
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