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Shanti Yoga Studios Logo

Here are three logos I created for a yoga studio, let me know what you think.

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hodgesant's picture
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Top one. No. 1

The other two look a little odd (if that is the right word?)

No. 2 - I think the patterns round the edge are good but as a Logo would it make the text very small. On a business card I think you may loose the wording somewhat.

No. 3 - At first glance I thought you had spelt it wrong. With the "A"s looking like "O"s. The guy on the top of the logo looks too far away from the text also - like he is flying!

If I were the client - No. 1 would win for me. Clean, srisp, and modern. Quite a peaceful element to it also.

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paka's picture
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Nice ideas, however, as a human entity I've got my own concept. OK, first I will follow comments style as post above.

No1. From these three, if I were a client, I would choose no. 1
No2. Too big, and too small. Too big, cause it relatively takes a lot of space with very thin lines and small, cause it uses a lot of empty spaces, making whole lost in (empty) space.
No3. Good, but... but something is missing, and again too much spaces.

I would make design No.4.
Take the first logo, move the guy from the "A letter" to the left, and add these "roses" kind lines around a guy. Something like that :) So they will have nice font, and second of all they will have their own sitting guy logo in a reasonable and viewable size :)

Cheers!

archmedia's picture
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hands down the last one, just bring the logo closer to the typography a bit, as is it makes it look like the guy is floating. but i love the logo. other then that i'd personally look at other color options, i personally tend to avoid purple for some reason. but all in all, the third one is my favorite. nice work on all of them.

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Berry14's picture
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Thanks for the feed back everyone. I'm still waiting to hear from the client to see which one she prefers. I'm favoring the last one, but I think if I change the type and position it will come together nicely.

Thanks again,
Berry

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