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shattering the silence

artviolator (8 pencils) | Mon, 2007-07-23 17:48

something's missing..shadows or smth. it's just a emotional portrait.thank you for your time.hope you can see the details.

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cmyk.designs | Mon, 2007-07-23 17:56

You could really bring this to life with some colour... It looks like you're going for a graffitied look, but it lacks the life colour will bring this...

Great start.

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artviolator | Mon, 2007-07-23 18:18

i thought of putting some colour in it...but i'm afraid not to ruin it.i'll try it ,though. cheers!

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cubus | Mon, 2007-07-23 18:09

Nice portrait. I don't think it needs color. Maybe adding just one color could have a nice effect, but I like it just the way it is.

and btw, if you like doing portraits, check out www.pieples.com.
It's an online art project where you can upload artwork, based on photos send by its visitors

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artviolator | Mon, 2007-07-23 18:23

thanks.i've looked over that site. the portraits over there are hand-made (paintings or drawings). i'm kinda into vector art.and believe me...when it comes to doing this it's a pain in the a**:)

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cubus | Mon, 2007-07-23 18:54

Yes, most of them are hand drawn, or drawn on a wacom.

But there are vector 'portraits' too, for the moment I'm the only one doing it though :)

http://www.pieples.com/portfolio/cubus

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plugz | Wed, 2007-07-25 11:17

it's a bit flat, you need more tones, highlights and shadows in there.

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