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Sight & Ear

ryaneses (14 pencils) | Wed, 2012-10-24 17:23

Another project I am working on is the evolution of the clients logo...
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Art D. Rector | Wed, 2012-10-24 19:16

Looks like the ideas from your other (sexual healing) logo are bleeding into this one.

Where are the visuals? Eyes, ears, whatever? Typographic logos are fine - but this one is very conducive to some interesting visuals. You're a graphic artist - not a typesetter.

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wgzn | Wed, 2012-10-24 19:55

TOO MUCH GOING ON

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JasonPau | Wed, 2012-10-24 20:04

The second version reads "SF" or even "SIF". The white line in the middle could easily be mistaken for a capital "I", and the lower bar of the E is hard to see, thus at first glance it looks like the letter F. (When I first saw it I thought it had something to do with San Francisco.)

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mara06 | Thu, 2012-10-25 02:36

I had exactly the same reaction.

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wgzn | Wed, 2012-10-24 20:11

dont ya think an eye and ear icon, or light and sound icon would be a bit more fun?

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