Simple Card

Yeah, that's much better.

The margins for the back need to be brought in. The text is too close to the side, for two reasons:
1 - Text needs a little breathing space to make it legible. Basically to give your eye a place to "latch on". So close to the edge it confuses the eye.
2 - When these cards are printed and cut words that close to the edge stand a small, but reasonable chance to be chopped right off. (Also, don't forget to add bleed (not to be confused with margins) to the backside of the card when taking it to print.)

Bleed: outside the page edge. (like html margins)
Margins: inside the page edge. (like html padding)

I like it a couple thouhts

Agreed about the text being to close to the margin, not only because of printing problems but because it creates stress in the design. I really don't like business cards with too much information but if you have to I would make the text on the back a little smaller to use more white space.

I like the front of the card, although I would left justify it, to keep the consistency with the back. Or center the back

Oh yes, this is an enormous improvement. Mintsauce's advice is spot on, as usual.

The tracking on the word "valeting" still bothers me, though. If you have permission to change it, I would suggest you either pull it in and center the word, or make it larger and bolder to fill the space. As is, it really looks low-end; although the company touts its affordability in its very name, you don't want it to look cheap.

hello everyone thanks alot, im glad i took ur advice, the valeting company is actually my own, im just starting up, you can probably tell im not a graphic designer or anything, ive just used photoshop as a hobby, ive reloaded the updated image again lol

Cheers! ready for print?