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Patrick Yan's picture
15 pencils

simpleand

new design of simpleand.com...not sure: it doesn't look "right" or "good enough" for me :( but my friend likes it :\

Patrick Yan
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simpleand

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JimD's picture
2617 pencils

Well, it IS simple.

Might I suggest you break that into two columns, or at the very least, make the one column you have about half the width. There's a reason newspapers have 2 to 3 inch columns... it's because that's all the human eye can read without straining. The text box you have is just too wide for easy reading, and that will hurt your traffic.

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Ivan's picture

Nice colors. I agree with Jim. Also you may want to consider increasing the line height.

Gody's picture
58 pencils

MMMMMMM this looks very clean, contemporary and refreshing. Those are all the feelings and emotions that come along with the color blue and not to mention your use of white space

Love the design but I would agree with with jim. Breaking it into two or three columns would be the final touches to the piece but I would also recommend a pull quote in light grey with some nice big quote marks.

Care to try that? I think that would be an elegant touch if you have something to make a pull quote of. Let me know what you guys think (Ivan and Jim).

likeburning's picture
8 pencils

I'd like to see it with the multiple column layout as well. It's a good looking start though!

Patrick Yan's picture
15 pencils

check out the new one i attatched...i increased the line height and added a column. what do you think of this one? also tell me if you like the right aligned text :\

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Anonymous's picture

I agree with all of the above. It soes seem a little rigid though. You could consider increasing the & symbol and dropping it into the white area.

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

There's 'clean' and then there's 'empty'. Your design is the latter. Can you show us something that is more complete so we can critique that?

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