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Spa Website

Spa Website

This is gonna post soon! its a spa website for splashtown pools!
You guys see anything out of place or funky?
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Jammo's picture

Just had a quick look through, and so far seems like a nice site. Although you need to be beaten with a stick for using those shiny metallic orbs in your preloader with the nice design of the rest of the site.

nice work overall, just fix that loader!

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Brig's picture
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Jammo,

That is damn funny!! Yes! i should be beaten with a stick, a very jagged one!
but the client requested it! I dont know why, but i hate it too! I originally had a nice bar that matched the color scheme, but then the "LORD CLIENT" looked at another site that hade a preloader and wanted me to make it look the same!
good excuse huh!

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i like the way the preloader works, having the circles but as the designer you need to know that the client is not always right. I would suggest, keep the preloader style, but change the graphics back down to plain circles (maybe the beige/light brown color you've used)

Also re: what David said below, the table/chair does need something behind it but i think if you do anything too heavy it will loose that "out of the box " feel. Perhaps just a slight shadow on the floor where the chairs / table are. Also a couple more things, your site credits link could probably be a bit smaller and in a lighter font, and without underline, use the underline on a:hover (and you'll also need to set a:hover and a:visited as blue and purple look like you've not bothered much with your own credits... just a thought)

Again, nice work dude.

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grafixforlife's picture
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The only thing that looks funky to me is the bottom where the furniture and 'site designed by' statement are floating in a white nothingness...i'd use a light fill color in the palatte you have going. Maybe even mirror the usage on the top to bring it together.

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Im finding error 404 on pages,

http://www.distantcloseup.com/splashtown/spa.html

and when you select the products i get 404
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Vortex's picture
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i'd suggest to have the navigation buttons at the top do something when they are moused over, maybe in flash?

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