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Space overboard

Space overboard

So I kinda went overboard working on my star system here for a simple rotating earth. I know enough that the composition is all messed up. But for some reason I like the mess.

But thats not the point, What is f'ed with this as a "bring it altogether" piece? I know my world has no clouds, I have to break up my 3d render so I can get them back on, but till then I think it's to blue as well.

I did however try to use the lines to focus to Earth

:D Go crazy !

pokie's picture
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What is this for exactly?

natobasso's picture
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Your lines are too clean and geometric to be natural space phenomenon. Rough them up a bit. Example:

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tripdragon's picture
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Well thee earth is for an animation, but the zoomed out view is for me unless I paste some text on it somewhere, but I need to understand it some more before I do that. However natobasso I thank you very much for that comment. I need to get my tablet out again, I have little patience painting with the trackpad

natobasso's picture
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Well thee earth is for an animation

Can you explain more about what the animation is for?

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tripdragon's picture
417 pencils

A space docu show. A lot of computer graphics will be in it. Other than that I can't detail it to much cause Google Caches EVERYTHING!! Hell I should be posting stupid water marks on this despite it's current state, but it's really small so ah, wells.

I made some red and gold ones as well but might just crap the stars and start over atm.

But thank you for your help.

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