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gunmetalblack's picture
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squid love

mk :) this is a t-shirt design that im going to submit, but i know it needs some work, im just at a dead end though, any help would be great :D thanks. this is my tag line for the shirt

"squid meets girl, squid falls in love, squid vomits ink onto wall in the shape of a heart to show affection....is there anything more romantic? "

here is a better quality pic squid love

squid love

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johnwdefeo's picture
43 pencils

Where will the tagline appear?

John W. DeFeo
Brand Development & Creative Solutions
www.johnwdefeo.com

gunmetalblack's picture
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sorry the tag line isn't "on" the shirt, it just goes with the pitch of the shirt. my bad

zzz's picture
85 pencils

I feel like eating a squid.

3dogmama's picture
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Should the male and female squid's colours--pink/blue--be reversed? As it stands now, it appears as if the female is yakking.

On the back of the shirt, would it help to tie into the front design if the male squid looked more excited and even had some initial ink spatters oozing from its mouth?

ciao
3dogmama

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