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Dorianphoenix's picture
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Studio Logo

This is a logo design that is based off of a animated logo for my studio. Since I've never really made a logo before please tell me what I'm doing wrong.

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waffleboy's picture
64 pencils

What kind of studio? design?

Dorianphoenix's picture
33 pencils

Animation.

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Using the wrong font for one thing. You should never use that font in a logo unless you're King Arthur. The cheese by itself would probably work better. And instead of reversing the knife where it goes into the cheese, use an outline of the knife to show where it impales and have the knife all black.

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

why he can't use this font?

yes I'm brazilian xD

Dorianphoenix's picture
33 pencils

Thank you, will try that.

Dorianphoenix's picture
33 pencils

Do you have a suggestion for the type of font to use?

gwells's picture
1711 pencils

the font is illegible. and over-kerned. you have to work to read it. that's a bad thing.

the little... is that a bug?... the little bug... too small, too difficult to understand what it is.

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Here's a font suggestion...
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Kerning needs some work - but you get the idea. Then you have little animated mice come out of the letter holes, pick up the cheese and carry it off screen.

If you're going to go crazy... go crazy. :)

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

really more funny and light than gothic :)

maybe all yellow coloured on black background

yes I'm brazilian xD

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