"stupendo sensation" clothing brand

I really like the typography, though where the d and t meet, there is a white hairline.

What is that thing to the left? A pear? It looks weird.

yep!! it must be weird…it was an art school test by a "stupendosensationboy", revisited
i'm not sure if it's good or not…nut surely weird!! ;)
tx p.

the type is hard to read, but gorgeous.
im not sold on the pear.

it quite nice overall. that type, is simply gorgeous. the d and t do look weird.

the type is hard to read, but gorgeous.
im not sold on the pear.

it quite nice overall. that type, is simply gorgeous. the d and t do look weird.

The pear needs to go... it's distracting, out of place and doesn't support the overall image. If you want to keep it, I'd recommend working it into the "O".

You've got an excellent start to the logotype, but a few 'connections' and the inconsistency in letter sizes and spacing need adjustment.

[1] The first 'n' in sensation is awkward.
[2] chop off the top of the 't' in sensation to eliminate the tight fit with the 'd' above.
[3] adjust the size of the 'e' in stupendo to match the size of the 's' below.
[4] even out the space between letters.
[5] the 's' in stupendo is a bit disconnected and seems to be hanging out of balance.
[6] 'tup' in stupendo seems to be riding higher than other letters.

Here's an alternate variation. Just some recommendations. Use what you like, discard the rest in the appropriate garbage can.

Overall, beautiful handling of the type.

P.S. - It would be interesting to see a version with a 'tall S' at the beginning. I tried but it just isn't right.

I find it rather difficult to read

... put the "stupendo" in an easy-to-read font and "sensation" in the typeface you chose?

…I'm working on the readibility for now, looking at NRG_creative comments.
Truly, I've thought to compose a smaller logo - for example two "S" linked by a star or something similar (S*S) - with a ultra modern type for "stupendo sensation" at the bottom.

I'll post my work in 2 or 3 weeks.

Thank you for your comment and I hope you understand my maccherone english!! ;)