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andrewlee's picture
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Supa Boba Graphic Design

Hello again. This is a website I started working on recently. It is an online portfolio for a graphic designer. It is supposed to have a cutesy, crafty, hand made feel. This is the initial design I've come up with, let me know what you think! Thanks

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Donkdafied's picture
80 pencils

I dig this! Like the character illustration. Think I wouldn't mind seeing the top serrated edge and blue background moved down a little bit. It would also be nice if the three bottom pictures align with the nav menu a little cleaner on either side. Also the ampersand might add more interest if it was encapsulated by something other than a circle, perhaps a different shape? Subjectively I am not that fond of the body type not in caps, don't really like the "t"'s on this font for some reason. Nice work imho...

ranamaju's picture
236 pencils

Website in this size can't be judged.

Thanks!
RANAMAJU
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riqsane's picture
149 pencils

OMFG. SUPA CUTE!

Love it! x

Ricky Sam
www.rickysam.com

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

Love it (2)

yes I'm brazilian xD

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Righteous.

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

I like it, it is very cutesy. I think you can expand on the 'crafty' and 'handmade' feel, the only thing that suggests that so far is the typeface and the curved edges on the nav banner.

The light blue is disappearing into the beige background making it all a bit uncomfortable on the eye in my opinion, give it a notch more contrast.

I would like to see this at 100%, it is difficult to judge subtleties at this size.

Overall, good work

Really like the ampersand, what font is that?

living on dreams and custard creams.

andrewlee's picture
24 pencils

Hey guys, thanks for all your comments, I will make some changes and show you how it turns out.

Also, by the way, you can click the link "Original" to see the full size original upload, (on any critique post)

riqsane's picture
149 pencils

*hug*

Ricky Sam
www.rickysam.com

sherry.ma's picture
109 pencils

So, hold on. You're making a website for ANOTHER graphic designer? It would be worth more brownie points if she just designed this herself.

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Not all graphic designers do web. A lot focus solely on print.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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