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ollstar's picture
109 pencils

The Love&Hate Fairytale Tour 2007

This is the poster to a tour of three bands some friends of mine play in. It was just for fun, the tour does'nt really exist, i just wanted to know what you think about it.

Its part of my work to get into the university of applied arts in vienna...

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The Love&Hate Fairytale Tour 2007

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olliesan1's picture
288 pencils

Love and hate are passionate feelings, so maybe warmer colors would be be more appropriate. The blue's just kind of cold. I wonder if there's another way you could symbolize love and hate, I think the heart might be too obvious. And maybe you could play up the fairytale aspect a bit more. Create a kind of twisted fairytale. Just some suggestions.

ftrc's picture
145 pencils

i really liked the top part but the bottom seems a little weird.

sidesey's picture
280 pencils

I agree with ftrc on that, really don't like the flames, don't think they go with the top section, or the type at the bottom. I do quite like the blue, but maybe try some other colours too. I think you are on the right track, a bit more work and it should all come together.

melange's picture
134 pencils

I'm definitely going to agree here as well. I think the top is great, but I feel like you got kind of lost on the bottom or something. Maybe incorporating some more of that illustration on the bottom corners or something?

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ollstar's picture
109 pencils

thanks for the comments so far

i agree with the things, that the top part is better than the rest, maybe i was a bit rushing at the end...

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