Tour Flyer for friend's band
mikelufholm (78 points) | Sat, 2009-11-14 18:12
The white space if left so that he can right in show times and venues with a marker. I appreciate the feedback!
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That white space is MASSIVE. He could put the concert date and directions to the after show party in there too. I'd enlarger the rest of the art and minimize that area some. Also - TOUR is overpowering the name for me. You could cut out that extra bit of photo on the right of the binoculars (and the section under them - make it see-thru to the jungle), move them over some, increase the name size, reduce "tour" and move everything down a little to account for the white box shrinkage. Put more jungle behind everything to fill space.
Jmho.
any better?
better but no good yet
it's cold, it's not bombastic, NEED TO BE more ROCKN'ROLLER even GRUNGE but need to DESCONSTRUCT something or ALL!
the margin could be darker not brighter and embossed I dunno :P
try SEPIA too
I need more impact!
Ronaldo! xD
What happened to the blue text? Or forget blue and make it red now so it stands out. You could add a rock & roll aspect by putting a guitar in sasquatch's hands.
Sorry, this doesn't say rock and roll. AT ALL. Like qwerty says, needs more of a rock and roll impact.
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Also sorry, This looks like an add for National Geographics.. Not a music band.
What happend to sasquatch? now its Bigfoot..
Sasquatch couldn't make the show, so his cousin Bigfoot took his place.
Leaky Penny
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We artists are indestructible, even in a prison cell or concentration camp I would be almighty in my own world of art. Even if I had to paint my pictures with my wet tongue on the dusty floor of my cell. - Pablo Picasso
any particular reason you're making it landscape? traditional show posters are portrait oriented. and at least in part due to what people have commented about above: it allows a smaller white space at the bottom and a larger image at the top.
take a look at www.gigposters.com for designs that reflect the music and work from there.