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Tourism Calender

This is a calender for a tourism client based on desire to live in natural place which he/she dreams.

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Tourism Calender

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qwertyale's picture
1770 pencils

I want :)

I think you don't need to write "calender". 2010 is enough and left aligned must be cool to introduce January with charm :)

yes I'm brazilian xD

robbie's picture
356 pencils

check your alignment, looks like september is out.

also you need some zeros in the blank days in January to be the same as the other months.

I like this, it creates a nice feeling, im not sure about the red bush in the foreground on the right, it kinda throws the image out, i keep being drawn to it and not looking into the distance.

sweet.

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

captonjohn's picture
347 pencils

robbie,
Actually this is the issue that whether should I keep zeros or not. Can removing zeros may unbalance month structure?

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www.jackmancer.com's picture
547 pencils

I would go for a blue sky but I think it's something personal. I can't stand the orange-green colour. Otherwise I really like it. Printed on a paper that's a little glossy would look great.

pimiento's picture
44 pencils

Should be "calendar" with an 'a' - shouldn't it?
Doubting myself now. Is there any British/American difference with this word?

Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

Bob Ross!
According to Google its CalendAr for both USA and Britain btw.
If a sky is red in Holland, it means that there is a large possibility for rain.. So I also prefer a blue sky..

Leaky Penny's picture
2592 pencils

Did you do that illustration yourself? Is it a photo you took?

Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

captonjohn's picture
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I didn't got right photo that's why I created this image which I had in my mind. The scene is of a morning where sun is rising and its light falling on crops to create a golden and dreamy look.

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captonjohn's picture
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I also prefer blue sky but this scene was of sun rise that's why I added orange color to add some dreamy and heavenly look.

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Leaky Penny's picture
2592 pencils

But this is way past sun rise. How did you create that image, it looks nice.

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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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Art D. Rector's picture
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I love the colors. It's a fantasy scenario to me - like your destination is the Garden of Eden or something. But it does have problems. The red bush for one - it doesn't bother me as much as Robbie - but it needs to be subdued some or balanced by something on the other side. The bigger problem is the horizon line - the entire valley up front is tilted to the right way too much. I'd figure out some way to level that off in photoshop. Maybe just tilt it back to the left a little would work - but watch the mountains and sky in the distance that you don't create the opposite problem (tilted to far left).

Then the calendar formatting is a mess. You need to delete all the zeros - nobody does that. And then decide if the days, dates, etc... are going to be center-tabbed, left tabbed, or right tabbed - whatever - and do it to the entire calendar. Uniformity seems to be missing here for me. Try different ideas on one month, make it look good, then apply it to all the other months.

mara06's picture
2454 pencils

Eliminate the zeros in the day-of-the-week blocks that have no date. And remember this little rhyme to help you remember which months have how many days in them:

Thirty days has September,
April, June and November;
All the rest have 31,
Except for February, which has 28,
Except in Leap Year, when it has 29.

I know. It's a really crappy rhyme. It barely even rhymes. But everyone I know uses it to remember whether or not there's a January 31st. (There is.)

Mara

Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

We always use our fingers.
Make a a left handed fist and look at the back of your hand, then your pinky knockel is Januari, the space between your pinky and your ringfinger is lower so thats less days, then the nockel of your ringfinger is March, again higher so 31 days and so on and on and on
until you reach your indexfinger (is that good translated?) you move to your right hand, starting with your indexfinger Augustus.. again 31 days and the space between the indexfinger and your middlefinger is low, thats September.. 30 days..
Between the fingers is low = 30 days (except FEB)
the knockels are high = 31 days
The good to this method is that you automaticly know that July and Augustus have 31 days..
Easy :)

Art D. Rector's picture
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No offense, but I would need that tattooed on my knuckles to remember it.

Just use the first part of Mara's rhyme -
30 days has September, April June and November. What else is there to remember?

Hey - I just invented an easier one!

Bureauplus's picture
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why is my text removed?

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