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TR1 - Episde 4.1

Another attempt to create a logo for TR1.

TR1 for non-accompanying is a company that creates web pages and are willing to change the logo, you can see the actual logo here www.tr1.com.br

The first made a distinct change. Nothing more than a "T" forming a belt, or rather, a funnel, which represents a "translator" of customer information to binary information of the computers that is what the company does.

But the other, I made some changes about the crucifix and increased the negative spaces on top, and I changed the font, choose the future bkbt, simpler and thick, as qwertyale and import60 commented.

What do you think now?

Thanks guys, you really help me in this job.

TR1 - Episde  4.1

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Leaky Penny's picture
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I like the uterus on #1.

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monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

haha, open legs and crucifixes, reminds me of the Exorcist.

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qwertyale's picture
1770 pencils

Hi Emil,

bicho esquece esse crucufixo pelo amor de deus... xD
(for god forget this crucifix!)

I don't understand why you are mesmerized by this crucifix...
is this a portuguese (Portugal) company to use crucifix? you know it's not the "t" letter anymore...

these fonts are still the worst you could choose for a web company.
french TF1 channel could use this typo at 50's...

yes I'm brazilian xD

wgzn's picture
1540 pencils

you were better 3 versions ago.

import60's picture
74 pencils

It is disjointed, falling apart. The letter (font) still does not work. Why the cross? This version is less dynamic then the version before. I suggest break away from this idea.
Try doing some concept work and brainstorming and start a new direction.

ranamaju's picture
222 pencils

I told you on earlier post its inside. But as you didn't find it here is an example...

Thanks!
RANAMAJU

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Emil's picture
27 pencils

thanks, i´ll work on it .. i´m very unhappy with my development with this job.

ranamaju's picture
222 pencils

you are welcome. I will be happy if I can see the end product.

Thanks!
RANAMAJU

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emilsata's picture
11 pencils

I´m sorry ranamaju. But I didn´t finished this project.

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