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Trancendence

Brig (54 pencils) | Fri, 2006-04-28 19:43

Album cover for the new Trancendence... (it's a techno and trip-hop album)

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Brig | Fri, 2006-04-28 19:45

Im not really sure if i want to keep the moden in!
What do you guys think?

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sonixevo | Sat, 2006-04-29 00:12

i like the colors.... but i agree with brig, the model looks a bit redundant i guess.. especially for a triphop/techno album, kinda weird for me. and one more thing, on top left side of the brown words, there are some small words in blue... maybe you could change the color to something which fits the scheme more? just my opinion...

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Flub-Dub (not verified) | Tue, 2006-05-02 16:21

well the model is not in the same style with the rest of it.
maybe you could trace it and give it a more illustrative look.
or heavy filter it to lose some details.

also, i would remove the top red bleed.
i think you have too much of it around the edges.
maybe if you could keep the top cleaner, so you can heavily mess in the bottom. :)

the cyan does not bother me. its small anyway.

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Ivan | Tue, 2006-05-02 19:03

I like it as it is. I would probably only try to posterize the girl a bit. Otherwise very solid work!

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nerdunit | Tue, 2006-06-27 17:40

love it. love the type too.

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onegirlcreative | Tue, 2007-02-27 05:36

I think it's cool, as well. Very retro! It reminds me of something you'd see from the 70s. I love that!

Plus, I would keep the model, but not the photo of her. I would do a vector image of her in Illustrator or Freehand and just add some "funk" to it. Then it will really give it a retro feel.

suzanne maestri-walters :: graphic designer

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