UGH Exhibition Poster
Donkdafied (80 pencils) | Mon, 2010-10-11 02:48
Hey all, was hoping to get some advise on this poster. Not in love with the font I choose for this, seems a bit cluttered, but I think it works with the wood theme I'm trying to portray? Drew the Tiki and scanned that sucker in then colored it. I'd love any advise on how to color/paint better as I am a noob on that. I dunno something isn't popping as much I'd like it to not sure why. Thank you for the time!
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I think the illustration is great. Though it looks like the facial expressions are indicating its a painful experience for the musician. i assume its his singing face. maybe a slight tweak to make it look little more joyful experience?
Maybe just use the font for the heading then use a secondary font for the information, something a little more legible.
The blue background works well, for relating to hawaii. Ive never been, but it certainly has a hawaiin feel to it.
As for the 'pop' it is all very balanced and central, maybe play around with the positioning of the image in more dynamic position?
I like it otherwise!
Hi! First of all: nice work! Just as El Fardo says, the illustration is great.
If you want to make it "pop-up" more, maybe try some contrast with the background color (opposite color in the color wheel for example...). The singer is quite dark, so maybe you could try with a lighter color.
I like the "woody" font. If you're not confortable with it, it could be because it doesn't read well when its small. Try some neutral font (like Gill sans for example) for the info, leaving the title with the "woody" font.
Hope this helps.
Agree with the others - the illustration is sweet.
The font is just too much - you have it everywhere. Do like the others said and use the wood thing for the headers and something else for the details.
Also agree I'd like to see the guy bigger with maybe him on one side and the text next to him or something.
i like it, it reminds me of spongebob.
I want to go.
The illustration is great, but as said before, could be a bit friendlier. Type is very tight, work on the legibility.
This made me smile.
living on dreams and custard creams.
Also watch your spacing on the Sheraton and UGH logo. I'm sure Sheraton might have some guidlines that you're not adhering too.
I agree with the others too. Colours are great!
Also, if the tiki man is supposed to be playing the Ukulele, perhaps he should be playing it. His hands are not in the right spot.
I love it. great job
Julie
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I like all.
(maybe I coloured some types)
yes I'm brazilian xD
This is cool man. I'm really digging it! That font is terrbile when shrunk to a certain size though, so watch for that. Text on the left is a little choked IMO.
Damn good effort if you ask me.
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
give kudos to you MAN