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UN.plug

Touraj Sabery Vand (151 pencils) | Tue, 2006-08-08 20:01

United Nation In LEBANON

Graphic Designer : Touraj SaberyVand , from IRAN
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Scabby's picture
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Scabby | Tue, 2006-08-08 22:44

I like this. I think it is a good concept, but could use a little work in the execution. The outlet looks out of focus, and maybe the the line should read unplugged.

Tigerstorm's picture
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Tigerstorm | Wed, 2006-08-09 21:27

I dunno what's the meaning of it..

Shall it say "UN pulled the plug out of Lebanon"??

ShawnAllan's picture
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ShawnAllan | Thu, 2006-08-10 15:46

I think your call to action needs more action.

The statement 'United Nations in Lebanon' is vague, I agree with Tigerstorm, I'm left without fully understanding your message.

Though I do like the general layout and typography.
If you can dive a little deeper i think you could have a nice piece.

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