Updated Shirt Design
davidmcholland (104 points) | Thu, 2008-03-06 21:25
Thanks for the very frank reviews of the T-shirt design. They are all greatly appreciated...they're why I posted the work. I've submitted an updated design that reflects most of the comments made. Though it's still in the layout stage, take a look and fire away...thanks!
I think this is a lot better!
1. The bottom fin part of the fish doesn't look connected to the rest of the fish on the far left side. Is this because the color is missing from what you posted?
2. I think the date is too small.
3. Is there a particular reason why the "t" in "Sturgeon" is different from the rest of the letters?
Katie McDonald
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KMac
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I like it. Now add colour.
--Dropping the t spells surgeon. --
ttfn!
3dogmama
"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber
Ahhh....gotcha....thanks 3dogmama!
Maybe that clever play could be made more clear by actually dropping the "t" down below the rest of the letters a little? Just a thought....might get to disorganized again though.
Katie McDonald
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KMac
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don't like the date like that. almost looks like you're saying 1908. and the month is an unreadable afterthought.
i know someone else mentioned not liking it turned sideways, but i much preferred that way to the way you have it now. at least then it was readable. or you could run it small, right justified, under shawano medical center.
If it were a two color graphic, "surgeon" could be one color and the rest could be the second color, rather than outlining the "t". The outline of the "t" actually draws my eye to it rather than making me focus on "surgeon"
-G