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If you are trying to use the words, COMPUTER DOCTOR, as more of a descriptive tagline then treat it as such. The way it flows now is confusing and is reading as: THE PERSONAL COMPUTER GENERAL PRACTITIONER COMPUTER DOCTOR.

Also, as earlier mentioned by Mara, I too would try stacking the letters:
THE
PC
GP

Good luck.
3dog

"Those who dance are thought mad by those who do not hear the music."

fonts and balance, still.

I realize this isn't a logo comment, but is it at all possible that your client would consider ditching the PC GP thing? They apparently think it's amazingly cute. It isn't. It's confusing. Most of us didn't even pick up on the meaning of GP, even with a well-known medical symbol staring us in the face right next to it. Maybe the company should just be "The Computer Doctor."

In any case, that's not enough stacking. You want what Mama already posted, without the redundant tag line.

Or maybe something like this...

to put your foot down. You have to explain to this client that some things just don't work. Instead of racking your brain trying to make something that clearly isn't going to look good, you need to show your client alternatives that will be better. They'll appreciate you for not being a mindless "graphic artist" who simply puts other people ideas on paper and actually thinks on her own. YOU are the graphic designer, NOT the client. It ain't easy, and it requires an insane amount of guts, but you need to tell your client, ina polite way " Listen, I was working on your idea, and some of my own popped up, I just wanted to run them past you" Or something along those lines.
This concept obviously isn't working due to the sheer number of elements that are just not fitting together. THE PERSONAL COMPUTER GENERAL PRACTITIONER COMPUTER DOCTOR. Really? I mean seriously? Did they accept the cliched cross in the middle cause it ties in with other promotional items ( ie. biz cards) that they have or because you haven't presented any better ideas to them? The font is boring, the drop shadow is making my eyes tear up and the worse part is is its all fighting for attention with the element that should be getting ALL the attention, the actual LOGO.

Leaky Penny
www.leakypenny.com

“What ain't no country I ever heard of. They speak English in What?”
~ Jules Winnfield

for some strange reason I didn't get to reading the responses. We've been busy keeping that old wolf from the door. I came to the site today because I wanted to post a question on the forum and felt bad when I saw all the responses to the last critique I posted.
Thanks a million.
The way it stands now: The foot down thing didn't work. Yer man is sticking to his guns. I never even thought about how the thing reads like that.
But then again it's not meant to be read as a sentence. 'The redundant line' is more of an explanation as to what the pc gp actually is. Still I get your points. I'll mention it to him. I have a lot to learn...

Ruth