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Visitors Bureau Website

This is a mock for a local visitors bureau web site I am in contract to develop. I wanted to post it here for comments first. Any ideas and critical analysis welcome!

Thanks!

Post edit, I uploaded an alternative version.... to compare

Visitors Bureau Website

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MacRankin's picture
10 pencils

I suppose if i had seen this as a website up and running without first seeing the word, 'bureau', i might have said that it looks a bit too square.

That aside, everything looks perfect - as you might find atop a desk with all the papers arranged for this kind of viewing.

I love the colours that you have chosen, the leathery effect, and the way that the 'top' document casts an ever so slight shadow, or appears to.

Very nice :)

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calvincarl's picture
96 pencils

Looks really great and well planned. It seems to really clash with their logo, but then again, that is just mostly because the logo isn't that good (hope you didn't make it). :)

Ivan's picture

It looks nice. I would add a bit more orange. It is a bit too monochrome at the moment.

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