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Volleyball T-Shirt

This is a T-Shirt i designed for a High School Volleyball Team. Suggestions for improvement would be great.

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Ivan's picture

Looks retro. If that is the intention, which is cool nowadays with T-shirts than mission acomplished. Make sure it looks used when you get it printed.

garyW's picture
143 pencils

the "worn" photoshop treatment would greatly enhance this logo for print.

The easy way: Mr. Retro Machine Wash Filters

http://misterretro.com/machine_wash_filters_two.html
http://www.cameronmoll.com/archives/000027.html

Jammo's picture
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This is a really funky logo if its gonna be used with the wash filters, although I personally would have the 2006 the same angle/perspective as the other text, thats the only thing im not sure about.

Nice work !!!

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Apfhex's picture
325 pencils

The 2006 text does need to slant like the other text, that's the first thing I noticed.

sidesey's picture
280 pencils

Firstly like the logo! You could maybe overlap the 2006 on top or the richland text, that i think could work. Maybe also try busting out the figure at the top, only slightly though and perhaps make her slightly larger? That is all i can suggest really apart from maybe the wash filters mentioned above.

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