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Campagne publicitaire for a Avocats firm in Canada. SBL, well enraciné (rooted?) in its region

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Ivan's picture

Very nice, calm and pleasant. Once I know what this is, I may tell you more...

gosselin07's picture
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Congratulations and better wishes of success in Métro Plus Marché P.E.Prix. It is the depth and the health of its roots which make grow the oak. Simard Boivin Lemieux makes a point of congratulating the dynamic owners Yvon-Marie and Sylvain Bergeron. SBL is honoured to have contributed by its councils to their significant investment and thanks them for their confidence.

Dan's picture
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Like Ivan said, it's very serene. The "roots" of that tree could stand a little more blending because right now it's real obvious that tree was Photoshopped in. And maybe soften the tree's shadow..?

Ivan's picture

True. Grass doesn't grow that well under the tree. Just making thr gree less bright around the root will make it look real.

Jammo's picture

hopefully its not just me, but aswell as the grass/root problem making the tree look photoshopped, the trees colour looks like its too green? the rest of the artwork has pastel type colours, nice soft and dreamy, but the tree is quite pominent and needs to be softened.

like the rest of the design, has a nice feel to it, its just the tree sticks out like a soare thumb imo...

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