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WAVE Logo

A new logo was needed for WAVE ( Western Arizona Vocational Education) - I thought I would inncoprate there slogan(Ride the wave into your career choice) into the logo. If any one has any suggestions I am happy to hear them. Thanks!

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Anders's picture
413 pencils

Both bubbles and slogan will disappear upon reduction.

Dozer Creations's picture
43 pencils

Needs some work...

- The A is just breaking the blue circle - In or out
- Don't " " your slogan
- Why are you waves going in all directions?
- it doesn't feel like a "Wave" it feels like a tank

kayjb16's picture
6 pencils

Thanks guys I'll work on those things and let you know how it goes!

Art D. Rector's picture
2770 pencils

Fish tank here too - not a wave. Not very inspired either. Do you need to contain the water and the bubbles? How will anyone "ride the wave" if the water is inside a fish tank? This could be a fun logo - right now it's very pedestrian.

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

Pretty boring. Waves are dynamic! This not so much so. That circle is really getting in the way, and as others have said, looks like a fish bowl. I'm sure you can have tons of fun with this one. The font is not doing you any favours either. That tagline could use some rearranging as well, it's positioning looks like it was dropped there and forgotten.

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aroberts's picture
262 pencils

Just wanted to say that I agree with everything already said, oh and I bet my life savings (which is none, granted) that you didnt sketch and brainstorm before this.

qwertyale's picture
1834 pencils

What I saw:

yes I'm brazilian xD

taba's picture
163 pencils

Yes - I totally see that too! And the little bubbles at the bottom are the little fizzies that those cleaning tablets give off...

I agree with everyone else here who says to release the wave!

mara06's picture
2549 pencils

My first thought was that the goldfish was missing. If you want to project the idea of an endless wave (of opportunity, etc.) you need to get rid of the barrier of the "bowl" and let the wave loose.

Mara

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

Your logo is very constricted, set that wave free dude. Think... Hawaii 5 0 waves with a surfer coming out of a tube.

The word "RIDE" in your strapline and "WAVE" shout movement, I'm sorry, but I see none. I think it might be time to have a rethink.

This name has huge scope for being fun.

living on dreams and custard creams.

dalf22's picture
1 pencil

I think is like... something in the sea... like a restaurant, you know? Or something wet... someone drawning... it doesn't go with the idea of "wave" or "movement" that is important for the idea of chossing a career

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