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what do you think?

Greg (309 pencils) | Tue, 2005-06-21 14:21

These are the lrics to a song (Out of My Hands by Matthew West) I was just playing with type in greyscale and came up with this... what do you think? I welcome your critiques!

Greg :c)

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Ivan | Tue, 2005-06-21 15:04

I realized it's hard for me to crit a work, that has no well defined objective. I mean like a commercial purpose.

I would've thought that the right aligned copy would be hard to read, but in this case it was ok.

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pokie | Tue, 2005-06-21 15:04

It's nicely set up and all but the font is a little ordinary.

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mrbuhyah | Tue, 2005-06-21 15:29

Nothing amazing, but has a nice easy to read feel.

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gr33n | Tue, 2005-06-21 15:55

... who probably could ruin even that, but how is it possible to make black text/white background look bad if you have at least 0.01px of taste ...

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Greg | Tue, 2005-06-21 16:22

lol. You're right!!!

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Alexander | Tue, 2005-06-21 15:56

I wish my English vocabulary was better. Then i would have given an in-depth analyzis of the assymetrical balance in this piece..

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Greg | Tue, 2005-06-21 16:24

Hmm. I won't ask for anymore critiques of this... I suppose there really isn't anything to say. :c)

Thanks anyway!

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my work: http://www.one-waymedia.com

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matthew | Wed, 2005-06-29 16:57

About a 36pt font justified edge to edge spanning for a few pages :D

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