what do you think?
Greg (311 points) | Tue, 2005-06-21 14:21These are the lrics to a song (Out of My Hands by Matthew West) I was just playing with type in greyscale and came up with this... what do you think? I welcome your critiques!
Greg :c)

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I realized it's hard for me to crit a work, that has no well defined objective. I mean like a commercial purpose.
I would've thought that the right aligned copy would be hard to read, but in this case it was ok.
It's nicely set up and all but the font is a little ordinary.
Nothing amazing, but has a nice easy to read feel.
Ron Gallagher
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... who probably could ruin even that, but how is it possible to make black text/white background look bad if you have at least 0.01px of taste ...
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lol. You're right!!!
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I wish my English vocabulary was better. Then i would have given an in-depth analyzis of the assymetrical balance in this piece..
Hmm. I won't ask for anymore critiques of this... I suppose there really isn't anything to say. :c)
Thanks anyway!
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About a 36pt font justified edge to edge spanning for a few pages :D