Why Wait Webs Business Card
luminousnerd.com (148 pencils) | Wed, 2007-11-21 23:17Hey,
I've posted earlier revisions quite some time ago. I'm hoping I can get some advice on this card before I go to print it. I fixed a lot of issues with it, so tell me what you think. I don't mind negative comments but please don't just say "it sucks" or "hopeless"...constructive comments, on the other hand, are very much appreciated!
Thanks in advance!
Thanks,
Jt Hollister
www.whywaitwebs.com
"Your time is limited, don't waste it living someone else's life."
-Steve Jobs
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I think that the picture that you are using as a background makes the business card look busy. If you want to stick to the clock I think an illustration would make it look cleaner.
dsaunadesign.com
Further to the comment above, maybe 'pulling/panning' back the image my help? Also with the descender on the 'y' going into the block below, makes it a bit hard to read. As an online company maybe more cold be made of the '.com' to reflect this?
Thanks for the tips :)
I was actually thinking about doing the clock as an illustration, so I suppose that's what I'll do!
I'm not sure what you mean by the "y" -- do you mean the hour hand going into the .com?
I'm not really an "online" company...I didn't want the .com to dominate the card for that reason. I just wanted it to be there, next to the company name, without having to add more text. If you got the idea I'm an online-only company from it, that's probably a bad thing. I'll rethink that choice.
Jt Hollister
www.whywaitwebs.com
Thanks,
Jt Hollister
www.whywaitwebs.com
"Your time is limited, don't waste it living someone else's life."
-Steve Jobs
Hi, the tail part of the 'y' (descender) of 'why' goes into the block below it, and it could just be my screen being dark, but it makes it a bit hard to read.
With 'webs' in the company title, I just assumed that it was an online thing and not had time to check out the URL.
Hope this is some help? Cheers
If you're not an online company why use the name Why Wait Webs? (WWW).
I know there's web based printing, but I think your business name doesn't match your market.
Why Wait Printing, maybe?
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Yeah, I see what you guys are saying...the ".com" area is too busy. I'll fix it.
But I really don't understand what you guys are talking about with the "online company" thing. A company isn't online...a company is a company, it's an entity, there's no online or offline. It can do business where it pleases.
My primary service offered is WEB design, hence the name Why Wait WEBS.
Jt Hollister
www.whywaitwebs.com
Thanks,
Jt Hollister
www.whywaitwebs.com
"Your time is limited, don't waste it living someone else's life."
-Steve Jobs