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woman's Death

Touraj Sabery Vand (151 pencils) | Tue, 2006-10-17 20:16

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dunny's picture
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dunny | Wed, 2006-10-18 02:59

very clever use of the female symbol, id lose the clouds, maybe make the black ground a little uneven, slight waves, bumps

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Apfhex | Wed, 2006-10-18 05:06

What does it mean? "Women's death" on it's own doesn't make sense to me. What is this, a flyer, a poster, a... ?

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functioncreep | Wed, 2006-10-18 15:26

Does anyone else thing the circle needs to be thickened to match the width of the cross? Or is it just me?

i like it tho.

tho i don't understand it and it creeps me out.

dunny's picture
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dunny | Wed, 2006-10-18 15:32

it is daark, and i too dont know what its for, looks like an early comp without client copy... also the circle does need to be thickened, good eye.

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Ivan | Thu, 2006-10-19 05:38

This can be adopted to some kind of breast cancer awareness campaign, but it's too dark I would say...

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