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kidtone's picture
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Woods Valley Golf Club

My latest creation. Let me know your thoughts, one page site so far. I used tables just because i had to get it up quick, i plan on using css to do the layout down the road.

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pokie's picture
1198 pencils

Nice. I would have probably made that top bar a monotone of either the green or brown rather than black, though.

dpc's picture
359 pencils

I agree that the title bar seems out of place, being that it looks grayscale. It seems also like you have some hierarchy issues, there is no distinction between the type on the left side, I can't tell if there is a title, or subtitle, or what part the body copy is. I think i also disagree with the font, it is very weak and techie. There is also hierarchy issues with the right side column.

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Ivan's picture

I like the colors. I like the decors.
Here are my comments:
1. I think there is white spacing issue on the right column.
2. The "NOW OPEN!" doesn't look right.
3. The header image looks very washed out. Maybe make even more abstract, so that one doesn't have the urge to look for details.
4. The two lines with little boxes below the header on both sides are little out of place.

Good luck

pedromperez80's picture
29 pencils

The only thing I suggest, is to to do something about the photograph, maybe put it an angle 15 or 30, or any other variation. The design is excelent but it needs somehting.... it's too Square.

wedgin's picture
267 pencils

I think you need some title headers or something. They should be the same font as the nice one you've used for the address and terms of service at the bottom. I also think the course image should extend from one edge of the type to the other instead of being centre aligned.

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