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Woods Valley Golf Club

kidtone (114 pencils) | Fri, 2005-06-03 17:49

Redid the template I posted the old one on here and got bad reviews :)

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Ivan | Fri, 2005-06-03 20:15

I just noticed one thing. The "HOME" is right aligned, "COURSE" is centered and the rest is left aligned. Is that on purpose?

Btw, which one got bad response? This: http://creativebits.org/node/1479 or this: http://creativebits.org/node/1372 ? I think they were both good.

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dpc | Sat, 2005-06-04 02:00

I was just going to say that about the alignment thing.

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mrbuhyah | Sat, 2005-06-04 20:44

I'm personally not a fan of the stitched together images (header). This is one of the first techniques I ever used in my early web design / PS days and now find it to looks dated and a bit tacky. Otherwise, the general layout and colour scheme is great.

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pokie | Sat, 2005-06-04 22:23

Me either. Maybe a gif/flash animation that changes the picture instead? Or maybe just use one. ;P

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kidtone | Mon, 2005-06-06 19:48

I agree its a bit tacky that is what the client wants though, If I had a nice panoramic I would push that route but I had very limited photo's to work with.

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mrbuhyah | Tue, 2005-06-07 03:01

I understand your position. I'm real big on having nice photographs, its always a downer when you don't have them to work with.

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Jammo | Tue, 2005-06-07 13:00

I like whats there so far, but I feel the stitch would be better if you lined some of the elements up, so there was no obvious points. - e.g the edge of the grass/dirt and the waters edge, if you could stretch the right photo down a bit and line that up, you could make the blend less obvious.

Also, like i say I like overall (except for the align problem on your buttons), but also the font you used on your buttons isnt sitting very well for me, I can understand that you will want to use selectable text and not images for the words on your buttons but maybe you could find a better font to use? Or play with the sizes / positions a bit to make it sit nice :)

Nice job dude, I thought the previous versions were nice too :)

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