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The WSCC is too spaced out... what do you think about the right justification?
Is this a logo or a business card.
Way too much info for me.
Need to figure a way to clean up the clutter.
I suggest decreasing the size of the tree as small as possible and placing it on top of the type. Acentuating some type way more than others to help your eye move freely through the design rather left right up down side to side.
thanks
dna
The text seems... too crowded, and all the same. Vary up the sizes (and weights, as you have) of the address, title, etc. I think the right justification works just fine. Perhaps try switching everything.. ie, move the text to the left, tree on right, and see how that looks. Overall, you have a very nice card.
Is that a bonsai tree?!?!
You didn't take any of my suggestions from the last post. Those vertical lines are unnessary, and what about getting rid of the WSCC and making more space for the other info?
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the tree seems pixellated to me. be sure that you are working at about 600dpi and CMYK color for business cards. This is *very* important when printing so the image isn't pixellated. Were you given vector data for the tree?