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Yatrab Rent a Car Logo

Here is a Rent a Car logo that i designed. Comment on it and give me more and more ideas!!!

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Yatrab Rent a Car Logo

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dirkdirka's picture
14 pencils

Hi Salmanulmulk, well I think this needs to be developed way more. The brush strokes are way too abstract, and I can connect on why you need them for a rental co. Also you can lose the drop shadow on the big word, it's not needed. And your hierarchy seems to be backwards, I would switch them. Keep working this.

mara06's picture
2454 pencils

Although I agree this isn't working, there is something in this design that interests me, and that is the red shape -- not the line under the rental company's name, but the part above that and to the left. It's like a stylized bird in flight. I wonder what would happen if you got rid of everything else and worked with that as a concept.

Mara

Ivan's picture

Symbol has no idea. Typo is bad. Start over fresh!

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