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allawy's picture
97 pencils

your critique please

the logo is called yahoo laughs . it is for a fun site that collect the funny and the stupid questions from yahoo answers.

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Ivan's picture

The tonality is good. Perhaps you can change the Yahoo logo, make the "oo"-s the balloons and let them fly.

Btw, are you allowed to use their trademark?

gwells's picture
1711 pencils

what ivan said. if you use a derivative of their logo, they will likely ask you to take it down once they find your site. that's a serious trademark infringement there.

is the "oo" in yahoo supposed to look like eyes? or boobs? i saw boobs first.

robbie's picture
356 pencils

i read it as yahoo rewind laughs, why the << ?

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

Good point, what is the << for?

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robbie's picture
356 pencils

in maths the < symbol means that everything that comes before it is smaller than what comes after. It kinda reads that laughs is bigger than yahoo?

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

taba's picture
163 pencils

Or, "Yahoo is less than laughs"

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

No no, I'm sure it means Laughs rewinds to Yahoo.

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3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

Lose the balloons and <<, turn the "O"s into zany crossed eyeballs, and curve the word LAUGHS into a smile. MAYBE add in some thick bushy eyebrows...

This will void the tit confusion gwells is having with it! ;)

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Art D. Rector's picture
2770 pencils

Sounds like the entire idea is trademark infringement. Everything on yahoo is copyrighted, I'm sure. Therefore you can't just take their yucks and repackage them.

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