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YuzuDesign.com 2.0

What do you guys think of this? This is for a web design and development company. The name "yuzu" is a type of Japanese citrus fruit. All of the company's side project incorporate leaves of some type into the logo. This kinda brings them all together.

Thanks, and I look forward to what you have to say.

-Ron Sper

Old one: http://creativebits.org/yuzudesigncom

YuzuDesign.com 2.0

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Ivan's picture

What is it for?

Leafs have been overdone lately.

RonSper's picture
31 pencils

I updated my post and image, please check it out. Thanks.

-Also thanks for running such a great site. Big fan,

-Ron Sper

Ivan's picture

Thanks! You guys make it good.

Leaky Penny's picture
2592 pencils

Much better than the last one, but as Ivan said, leaves have been done to death. You're moving in the right direction though. I would keep the fruit idea, but represent it differently. You can easily figure this one out man, get your pencil and paper. Hint: Draw as many different representations of the fruit as possible.

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Art D. Rector's picture
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If you want the leaves to tie everything together - then they have to relate to each other in some way. Either use the same leaf, or the same style of drawing the leaf... something. The "leaf" in the WhatWord logo has no relation to this one or the other Yuzu logo - people will NOT make any "connection" between these until you point it out to them... which defeats the entire purpose.

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