Zoe's Design Scrapbook Company
nrivera (9 pencils) | Sat, 2011-09-24 23:15
Hi, As you all may know making a Brandmark for yourself is the hardest part of all. So I decided to seek help in this brand I am making.
I am going to start a Scrapbook Company (local, that is why the text is in spanish) I am still not sure about the font on the bottom text. And this is just the first part, I dont want to work with color just yet, until I finish the design in B/W.
Thanks for your time, and I will be looking forward to your feedback! :)
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Soooo...ummm.. why the cloud?
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
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I thought it was a sheep. Would be great if you were a knitter, or wool-gatherer :)
Mara
the connected Z is a bit confusing, some might read it as Loe's.
yeah, the cloud connectivity doesnt really add value and it compromises character integrity.
mmm. I see a lot of lines... and what does the cloud mean?
The second one is better but It still doesn't convince me for some reason.
+1 to leaky and wgzn.
Ok, Thanks everyone, it is true, maybe I should get away from the cloud, I love the typography though, lets see! I will get on this as soon as I get home from work!
Thanks! :)
Like it. Simply, but effective.
You can tell it’s a custom “O”. Work some more on its line weight.
If you’re going to integrate the Icon into the text, be careful with your kerning.
Tighten the “OE” and “ES” to the right; it should allow you a bit more of a slant on the “Z”.
Otherwise, it works.
Thank you! I will continue editing it before i post it. :)
well, bubble is related to thinking, memories.
the "O" need a thickness adjusting at this scale.
I think a facelifted version could be researched... not this brainwash machine feeling of "forced to" bubble.
maybe it's more cool when you give freedon for the types, not a "glued with logo" feeling.
yes I'm brazilian xD