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bazzá discotheque identity

ojg76 (81 pencils) | Sun, 2007-08-26 06:56

This is my recent creation, in fact the opening was yesterday.
The whole identity for a discotheque
check the attached pics

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pokie | Sun, 2007-08-26 15:11

I really like the bottom half of this. I would just make the drop shadow things a bit darker so they don't compete so much with the actual text. Kern the last a in to the z.

The disco ball is weird. I didn't even realize that is what it is until I looked at all the other pictures you've attached. Maybe cut it off at the top or something? I don't know.

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Artfiend | Mon, 2007-08-27 18:02

I LOVE the play of lights on the ground due to the disco ball...but the ball itself needs MASSIVE work..it looks like a ball of yarn.

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ojg76 | Mon, 2007-08-27 20:09

I'm working on another version but made in Cinema 4D because i need to put that on a videoclip... this one was made on photoshop

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elbandido | Fri, 2007-08-31 04:45

I like the floor, but not the disco ball. Also, maybe get rid of the reflection at the bottom of the name. Instead of a disco ball, maybe have club lights breaking through in the background and a silhouette of people dancing.

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